composition-Drowning

"Let's go to the swimming pool ,"suggested mum ."Nice idea!"exclaimed dad ."Pack your things ,"said mum .They packed their things and they sat on their dad's car and they went on their journey to the swimming pool .
When they reached there ,they went to change into their swimming costumes . Janice was disturbed to see a sign which wrote 'No lifeguards here ,swim at your own risk!' Althought she was worried ,she didn't care .She played with his younger brother in the baby pool while his parents sat on the bench and reading newspapers .Her brother splashed water at her and she splashed back .After many times of splashing ,Janice was tired .She told her brother to wait at the baby pool for her to come back .After that ,Janice went out of the water to have a drink .
As she was drinking ,she heard giggling .She turned around .She was shocked!She saw her brother crawling to the deep pool ,which was beside the baby pool .Her heart almost stopped beating!
She quickly ran to the deep pool and tried to save him but it was too late .Her brother had drowned into the swimming pool .Her parents quickly ran to the pool .Her father jumped into the swimming pool and saved her brother out of the water .Her mother called the ambulance .
After a few minutes ,the ambulance came and brought her brother to the hospital .After a while ,the doctor came out .His face showed it all .Her brother was dead .It was the saddest day ever for Janice .