composition-The mischievous boy-Dave(revision 6)

A bee glide across Jane's vision , making her remember the day she was both happy and unhappy . She had mischievous brother called Dave .As she was scared of insects , she was always tricked by her brother , saying there is an insect on her or nearby .

A cheerful and happy day , which Jane thought it was , turns out to be another day which his brother tricked him .She was together with her brother at northpoint to shop .Half a day was gone , she , together with her brother went to the nearby McDonald's restaurant .

She told his brother to sit down on the chair at a vacant table .He acted as if he was in the police team and said , "Yes Madam!"She went to a counter and lined up for her turn . Although there were air-conditioners , Jane still perspire a little . Jane waited for a long time for her turn .When it was her turn , she ordered the food , grabbed the tray of food and walked towards her brother . When she was on her way to her brother , her brother stared at her and said ,"Sis , there is an large , gigantic spider on your arm ."Jane was scared out of her wits . Her brother laughed as Jane was brushing her arms . Everyone in the restaurant laugh out aloud . Jane later found out that there was not a single spider . She stormed back home . Her brother caught up and told her that he was sorry and will do anything she wanted him to do . Upon hearing that , Jane let out a big smile . She thought of letting her brother do all the house chores instead of doing it herself but she thinks that she should not be so cruel . Instead , she let her brother do the house chores together with her .
From then on , they help out each other , share they work and her brother does not scare her anymore .

composition-Train Accident (revision 5)

"For your own safety, please stand behind the yellow line." the speaker sounded as Jimmy and John stood at the MRT station.They were waiting for their parents at the MRT station patiently.Just then, Jimmy thought of a good idea - play catching . He told John his idea. John insisted not to play there as it is dangerous . Jimmy pleaded . John had no choice but to let Jimmy have his idea of playing catching . Jimmy wanted to be the catcher and John had to be the runner .They ran around the MRT station .
Just then ,John saw an opening in between the passengers.He quickly dashed through it .He felt as light as a feather.He looked down .He saw himself airborne .He was shocked .He dropped down into the train track . Jimmy saw him in the train track and quickly ran to the train track and told John to hold tight to his hand he pull him up . John lifted his hand up . Every time John lifts his hand up , he just cannot reached Jimmy by an inch. "Beep!" The horn of the train horned."Quick! We are running out of time!"
The track began to vibrate ." The train is coming! Jump！One of the passengers said. John tried to jump and grab Jimmy's hand but to no avail. The train came and dashed across like an angry ox. John screamed"Ahh... ...!" "No!"Jimmy shouted. After a few minutes, sirens of the ambulance filled the air. John was then brought to the hospital.
After a few hours ,the doctor came out of the emergency room and told us ,"He is out of danger but he had broken his left arm ."From then on , John's left arm had forever broken . Jimmy could not stop blaming himself for playing with him ,which had caused the accident .

composition-lost in the jungle(revision 4)

"Follow me carefully ,together with your partner ,especially the boy at the back ."said our instructor sternly .I had to be partner with my biggest enemy and the naughtiest boy in the class-Tom .We stared at each other ,blood boiling .
He seemed to have a trick up his sleeves today .Suddenly ,he swung a well-aimed kick at my legs and I fell on the ground .I groaned .The instructor looked behind and asked "Are you alright?""I was ......"Tom quickly cover my voice and said "Oh nothing ,I was just doing my warm up exercises when I accidentally hit Alvin ."They continued walking .I stood up and caught up with them.

I am trying to think of a way to get Tom into hot soup .Should I scare him along the way?Or should I trip him down too?Evil thoughts ran through my mind .Just then ,I got a great idea .I thought of getting lost to let him be worried ,scared and get punished by our instructor .I started my plan when the group moved .I started by walking slower than I normally did .When the group disappeared into the jungle,in ran in another direction .

On the way ,a loud growl jolted me out of my wits .Is it a bear?Or is it a lion?Or a ferocious tiger?Thoughts clouded my mind as I wiped the endless trickle of perspiration .I took out my torchlight and shone at the direction in front of me .I saw a large striped figure in front of me .I knew it was the tiger .It pounced at me ."Bang!"I looked at the tiger as it fell onto the ground ."Are you alright?"I heard a familiar sound .My instructor walked out .He told me to be careful next time and he punished us to do 50 push-ups in the jungle .
From that day onwards ,Tom and I became the best friends ever.

composition-cheating during exam(revision 3)

Staring at the third question of Section C ,thinking hard .I am racking my brains ,thinking how to do that question .When I got the answer of that question ,I pen my answers down .In the corner of my eye ,I saw wayne sliding her delicate hands in her pockets ,fishing out a piece of paper ,after she was sure that no one was looking at her .
Relisation hit me like a twenty pound sledgehammer .How is it possible?Wayne ,who is the cleverest boy in the class ,is cheating!I thought my eyes are playing a trick on me .I looked again .It's true!My eyes are not playing a trick on me .I look at Wayne again ,who was scribbling furiously on the exam papers while referring to the piece of paper nestled on his lap .I was in a dilemma .Should I tell the invigilator or not?If I tell ,Wayne will hate me and beat me up .If I don't ,Wayne will not change and will continue to do the wrong thing .No!I must not go against my conscience .
I raise my hand ,waving for the teacher to come .The strict and fierce teacher came in front of me .I told the teacher what I saw and she walked towards Wayne .She said to Wayne,sounding dangerously soft ,"Alvin told me that you have a little secret to share with me , tell me the secret ."I peep at Wayne ,who was staring at me ."Ring......."The recess bell rang .I tried to avoid Wayne and his friends .However ,Lady Luck doesn't seem to be on my side .I met them .I tried to give them a friendly smile ,however ,they rained punches at me .I was punched by them and laid flat on the floor .Wayne stepped on my spectacles and cracked my spectacles .Anger began to build up in me .I lunged at Wayne.He shoved me away and kicked me .After they left ,the world began to whirl around me as the last thin thread of consciousness slipped away and I was swept into unconsciousness .
When I woke up ,I found out that Wayne and his friends were expelled .I quickly ran to the principle's office and told the principle not to expell them and gave the reasons why .The next day ,Wayne and his friends found out that they can go back to school.They felt very happy .They later knew that it was me who helped them .They thanked me and promised to be my best friends ever .That was my happiest day because they were back to be my friends and also because that I had done a good deed .

composition-Drowning

"Let's go to the swimming pool ,"suggested mum ."Nice idea!"exclaimed dad ."Pack your things ,"said mum .They packed their things and they sat on their dad's car and they went on their journey to the swimming pool .
When they reached there ,they went to change into their swimming costumes . Janice was disturbed to see a sign which wrote 'No lifeguards here ,swim at your own risk!' Althought she was worried ,she didn't care .She played with his younger brother in the baby pool while his parents sat on the bench and reading newspapers .Her brother splashed water at her and she splashed back .After many times of splashing ,Janice was tired .She told her brother to wait at the baby pool for her to come back .After that ,Janice went out of the water to have a drink .
As she was drinking ,she heard giggling .She turned around .She was shocked!She saw her brother crawling to the deep pool ,which was beside the baby pool .Her heart almost stopped beating!
She quickly ran to the deep pool and tried to save him but it was too late .Her brother had drowned into the swimming pool .Her parents quickly ran to the pool .Her father jumped into the swimming pool and saved her brother out of the water .Her mother called the ambulance .
After a few minutes ,the ambulance came and brought her brother to the hospital .After a while ,the doctor came out .His face showed it all .Her brother was dead .It was the saddest day ever for Janice .

Composition-Fire

"Good idea!" exclaimed Tom, saying that playing with fire is a good idea."Where should we start a fire at?"asked Jim, in great delight."In the park, at a corner where there are a lot of dried leaves." said John, excitedly.
"Meet at the park later, remember to bring matchsticks."said Jim. "Ok!" replied Tom and John together . They met at the park , walk to a deserted corner and striked the matchsticks and started a fire . They thought that it was fun to play with fire but they didn't know that the fire is getting bigger . Jim felt heat fuming up beside his legs . Jim looked down . Fire was burning beside his legs . He was shocked . He quickly imformed his two friends that the fire is getting bigger . They wanted to escape but Jim was trapped in the fire .The red demons danced around him as if celebrating their victory of a successful capture of their prey .Tom and john stood rooted to the ground as they watched Jim disappear in the fire . They didn't know what to do .John remember that he has a handphone and quickly took out his handphone to call the fire brigade . He punched in the numbers to call for the fire brigade .
A few minutes later , the fire brigade came . When the fire brigade came , the whole tree beside it was burnt into pieces .The firefighters quickly put off the fire .The firefighters told them not to play with fire .
They now learnt that they should not play with fire because fire is a good servant ,but a bad master .