composition-The mischievous boy-Dave(revision 6)

A bee glide across Jane's vision , making her remember the day she was both happy and unhappy . She had mischievous brother called Dave .As she was scared of insects , she was always tricked by her brother , saying there is an insect on her or nearby .

A cheerful and happy day , which Jane thought it was , turns out to be another day which his brother tricked him .She was together with her brother at northpoint to shop .Half a day was gone , she , together with her brother went to the nearby McDonald's restaurant .

She told his brother to sit down on the chair at a vacant table .He acted as if he was in the police team and said , "Yes Madam!"She went to a counter and lined up for her turn . Although there were air-conditioners , Jane still perspire a little . Jane waited for a long time for her turn .When it was her turn , she ordered the food , grabbed the tray of food and walked towards her brother . When she was on her way to her brother , her brother stared at her and said ,"Sis , there is an large , gigantic spider on your arm ."Jane was scared out of her wits . Her brother laughed as Jane was brushing her arms . Everyone in the restaurant laugh out aloud . Jane later found out that there was not a single spider . She stormed back home . Her brother caught up and told her that he was sorry and will do anything she wanted him to do . Upon hearing that , Jane let out a big smile . She thought of letting her brother do all the house chores instead of doing it herself but she thinks that she should not be so cruel . Instead , she let her brother do the house chores together with her .
From then on , they help out each other , share they work and her brother does not scare her anymore .